September 23, 2007
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September 2007
Slow rain chase indoors
the cats, dogs, rowdy children
who make apartment complexes busy
with the voices of houses that used to be.Before divorce, before mom lost her job,
before the cost of paying all those bills
demanded the walls of the room with
yellow paint and glow-in-the-dark ceiling stars.Before the primordial soup bubbled
hot with rolling lumps of trying hard
to hang on to the smooth sides
until a new community formed.Renters, all, who crowd their shoulders,
their freezers and china hutches
into spaces designed to impress college kids
with bean bag chairs and blow-up mattresses.Before dust blew through the canyon.
Now September rain washes,
says start again, just like you learned
in those long ago Septembers of new saddle shoes,
new pens, new faces, new desk assignments, new plans.
Comments (10)
Wow...that was good.
OH...and yes....the saddle shoes.
...i wish it were as easy as a new set of school supplies...
...how did it get so compllicated?
this piece is simple, historic & smart
new books...new used books...the smell of those?
mmm....totally old school.
and?
i still really like this. no matter how shallow that may sound...i just flat-out do.
Beautiful writing. Judi
sigh
fresh starts
supposed to be a lucky thing at this time of year
Very nicely done.
Fractuals are equations beyond me but the programs to make them are free and fun. Judi
I love that nostalgia, it shapes our tomorrows. September is a good time for new beginnings.
Stanzas two, three, and four blow me away. Good to see you writing again, well posting again. "hanging on to smooth walls" my fav. Oh, I changed the title to Gallery Visit. Cheers
Beautiful but nostalgic poem for the autumn .
I find again your talent .
Love
Michel
lovely writing....how do you like Colorado Springs?
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