April 25, 2007

  • weird magic needs no
    satin swirl distracting eye
    suspicious watcher

    it rises inside
    casts a thin silvery line
    catches my belly

    ordinary light
    over the breakfast table
    remembered laughter

    current below talk
    homework, pets, appointments, milk
    your taste on my lips

     

    Sometimes a poem takes a twist that surprises me.  This one began with the phrase "weird magic" and I start thinking about what kind of magic is really weird.  The first stanza came as a haiku, but it didn't even come close to a complete thought, so I realized, this isn't a haiku, it's a stanza.  okay. 

    And then it seemed to me that the strangest magic I know, isn't flashy, or expensive, or wrapped up in showmanship.  It's something deep, intense, and personal that happens in an ordinary moment of awareness. 

     

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