April 25, 2007
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weird magic needs no
satin swirl distracting eye
suspicious watcher
it rises inside
casts a thin silvery line
catches my belly
ordinary light
over the breakfast table
remembered laughter
current below talk
homework, pets, appointments, milk
your taste on my lipsSometimes a poem takes a twist that surprises me. This one began with the phrase "weird magic" and I start thinking about what kind of magic is really weird. The first stanza came as a haiku, but it didn't even come close to a complete thought, so I realized, this isn't a haiku, it's a stanza. okay.
And then it seemed to me that the strangest magic I know, isn't flashy, or expensive, or wrapped up in showmanship. It's something deep, intense, and personal that happens in an ordinary moment of awareness.
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Your surprising twists are our pleasure. :so-cool:
An ordinary moment of awareness? I had no idea there was such a thing. I still don't. *smile* I know, I know. I'm a pain in the ass. Sorry. I don't mean to be.
:sicky:
this is ALL quite revealing.
Wonderfully so.
Wonderful poem and thoughts. Judi
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