March 4, 2003
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In the Spring a Young Man's Fancy
I like to dabble in poetry, but not nearly so much as I like to read it. I'm captivated by the surprising phrase, the sideways glance that the poet offers to bring a new perspective on the thing I thought I already knew. It seems to me that for as long as poets have been mining their langauages for that gem of an image, they have been placing those jewels around the topic of love. They write of friendship, of parental devotion, and the adoration of God. But, more than anything else they write of the love between lovers.
The Solomon's Song of Songs is an extended poem of sexual love. (Some of the images contained therein are considered so powerful that Jewish Rabbis used not to teach the material to anyone under the age of 30). There are spiritual applications of the poetry, the image of the jealous Lover-God who woos His people. But, these applications really have to be forced on the text. It is inescapably a love poem between a man and woman.
The Lover: You have ravished my heart, and given me courage with one look from your eye, one jewel of your necklace.
The Beloved: His hands are like rods of gold, his body a bright figure of ivory
The Lover: Your lips drip honey as the honeycomb, the fragrance of your garments is as the cedars of Lebanon
The Beloved: His legs are strong and steady pillars of marble
The Lover: You are an orchard of pomegranates, a paradise of precious fruits
The Beloved: His voice and speech are exceedingly sweet, he is altogether lovely, the whole of him delights.
The Lover: You are a fountain in a garden, a well of living water and flowing springs
The Beloved: My beloved has gone down to his garden, to the beds of spices to feed in the gardens and gather lilies. I am my beloved's and he is mine, he feeds among the liles.
From the Finale: Set me like a seal on your heart, for love is as strong as death, as hard and cruel as the grave, It's flashes are flashes of fire, a most vehement flame, the very flame of the Lord. Many waters cannot quench love, neither can the floods drown it. A man could offer all the good of his house for love, and they would be utterly despised.
That's some fairly strong stuff. I've been thinking about all the reasons that I so love the song that I mentioned in yesterday's post. Of course, it has a beautiful melody and is song with tones like warm molasses. But, it's the words in the end that I come back to over and over. In some ways, it reminds me very much of the poetry from Solomon's Song. Both are a duet between the lover and the beloved. Ultimately, rather than the specific images they use to describe their lover, the chord that resonates with me is that over-encompassing picture of intimacy. It's how together they become so much more than they can ever be apart.
He: She does not lazy dance
her hands on me
She does not talk, no pretty talk
she pleasures silently
With her I am SUMMER
I warm easy to her heat
She fill me full, she fill me full
she make me complete
Skin to skin, skin to skin
No cold wind blow on me, no cold wind blow on me
She: Skin to skin, skin to skin
The light it shine on me, the light it shine on me
He is a secret soldier
with pieces inside broke
He hides in his own darkness
his fire has no smoke
And when my body song begins
when he holds me tight
He chases all my shadows
and I burn so bright.
He: Skin to skin, skin to skin
No cold wind blow on me, no cold wind blow on me.
They: skin to skin, skin to skin
The light it shine on me, the light it shine on me
He: Winter inside of me,
ice to fight the storm
She cannot see what I hide in me
I can't be strong beside her warmth
She: Skin to skin He: She's too close
She: Skin to skin He: Much too close
She: No cold wind blow on me He: She's got a hold on me
She: No cold wind blow on me He: She's got a hold on me
She: Skin to skin He: She touches soft
She: Skin to skin He: Much too soft
She: The light is shine on me He: Her fire's burning me
She: The light is shine on me He: Her fire's burning me
Now that's just cool. Spring is almost here. I think I can see a few sparks being struck here and there. Soon there will be fires burning all around, and the thing about fire, it marks and changes everything it touches.
Comments (16)
I never thought about any connections 'tween The Bible's passages and Toni Morrison's titling of her novels, (i.e., Solomon's Song and Beloved) before I read this... Could be Toni also loved those passages, eh?
Lobe burns what it touches , it eats the other with passion .
Love Michel
beautiful
nice thoughts you brought into my mind
...lovely selections. I've just returned to appreciating Love Poetry with the discovery of some I like. For some time, the genre seemed to be too much of pain and remorse, as one of life's celebrations I like to read of it being celebrated.
MuSe
you need a cold shower ...... it is MUCH too early in the day to be writing like this!
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Ahhh, Spring is definitely in the air!! Thanks for giving us a warm (very warm) preview.
I need a cold shower
That's very poetic and lovely..."Many waters cannot quench love, neither can the floods drown it."...*shivers*
I couldn't really read anything sexual in Solomons Song. Was the bottom one yours, I enjoyed that more. Although I try and write poetry occasionally/ I am not a great lover of reading it much, just an occasional one. That is why I won't buy the International Library Books that mine are in, as I can't read many of the others, so a waste. This might be vanity on my part. I do hope not. Cheers Portia


The Song of Solomon has got to be my favorite bit in the Bible. What does that say about me? No doubt that I'm venal.
I think that the theologians who've worked so hard to produce an asexual interpretation for the Song are perhaps protesting too much!
Bah, everyone is getting the taste of spring but me! It's so damn cold here, and still snowing!
I like them. They do bring such happy thoughts and also teach me how nature is part of us.
The Song of Solomon to me is more poetic than inspirational. I scratch my head and ponder it's placement in the scriptures. For some reason, the Doors song "Come on Baby Light My Fire" is running through my head right now.
With such a smoldering poem in the bible the average christians overblown sense of modesty is really quite amazing.
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