October 31, 2002
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enchantment rises
mist from an ancient lake
subtle spell worked
by crafty fingers
reaching up inside
clouding the present I
with shades of a
remembered self
I hear the sound
smell the tang, of sweat
and sour and sweet
lump in my throat
through soft fog
new shapes appear
written over old shadows
wishes and pleas
Don't remember that I was
Remember as I wish I were.
Comments (17)
Delicious. Truly delicious. Just right. (and having your name on my sub list has MADE MY WEEK
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that is great and have a Happy Halloween.
Beautiful!
Blessings, ~Helena
Beautifull poem ((((Terri)))
AND we had the same supper... TOO funny ROTF!!!
Have a great weekend!!
You are WONDERFUL!
(Here's some gravy for you)
Ah, Quiltn', how sweet of you for the nomination!
Only problem: I'm not premium. Haven't even checked into the cost, actually. But I'm VERY flattered
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But what if you're loved just as you are? 'Tis beautiful (but aren't you supposed to be composing prose right now?
(((Hugs))) good morning. Great poem! I wish i could write them.
Thanks so much for posting the Xchange link on your site. It's people like you that will make this project a success.
nevermind....I've paid my $25 now
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Still love this poem. May have to hang it on my wall (with "quiltnmomi" attribution -- that should raise an engineer's eyebrow or two!)
Your poetry is definately better than my attempt at telling jokes. Enchore!!! More!
God Bless - Dale
What a wonderful poem! Thanks so much for stopping by to visit my blog, friend. Look forward to seeing you again, and visiting you here as well. - Susan
Talent, talent, talent. Fabulous.
I must have gotten in the wrong line when they were handing out poetry brains
. Guess I was getting little horns. 
Okay, this was a cheap attemt to use the
. Please help me......I can't stop.
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